Nanako Shimizu #A0102
Good Sample#1
This article is about the background behind McDonald’s new brand design. This article has many photos and videos inserted in various places for each item, making it easy for readers to visualize it. Some paragraphs are quoted from other sites, but the citations are easier to understand.
https://dorve.com/blog/mcdonalds-launches-2021-brand-redesign/
Good Sample#2
This article explains the new areas at Tokyo Disney Resort. The paragraphs are divided into subtitles and images for easy understanding. Additionally, information she wants to emphasize is in bold, making it easy to read.
Good Sample#3
This article is a review of Apple Vision Pro. It is excellent because it has a narrow target audience and contains all the information that the person who reads the article wants.In addition, the advantages and disadvantages of each perspective are listed, making it easy to understand.
https://www.techradar.com/features/apple-vision-pro-review-roundup-all-of-the-early-verdicts-so-far
Bad Sample
https://www.historycentral.com/postwar/Mcdoonalds.html
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History of McDonald’s beginnings
McDonald’s is now the most famous fast food chain. Peek into its rich history and explore its origins and the innovations that made it a huge hit. As an avid McDonald’s fan, I’m excited to take you on a journey through the history of the world’s most famous brand.
McDonald’s history began in the 1940s when brothers Richard and Maurice McDonald opened their first restaurant in San Bernardino, California. Originally a barbecue drive-in, the brothers eventually revamped the business by focusing on a simple menu of burgers, fries, and milkshakes. The Speedee Service System, which reduced service times, caught the attention of salesman Ray Kroc. In 1955, the company entered into a franchise agreement with Ray Kroc and opened the first McDonald’s franchise in Des Plaines, Illinois.
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