
- No.1
The article shares the 20 best airsoft guns for airsoft players in 2023 in six aspects, from fun to collectibility. It not only introduces the airsoft gun itself but also displays the advantages and disadvantages with charts, making it easier to understand.
https://www.redwolfairsoft.com/blog/best-airsoft-rifles-ultimate-guide
- No.2
This article carefully and step-by-step introduces readers to how to assemble a computer, and it is supplemented by pictures to make it easier for readers to understand the author’s instructions.
https://www.techradar.com/how-to/how-to-build-a-pc
- No.3
Various pot pie recipes are introduced with pictures and texts, so that even readers who do not know this kind of food can understand the appearance characteristics of the food itself through the pictures, thus achieving the publicity effect.
https://www.cnn.com/wbd/our-best-pot-pie-recipes/index.html
Sample of Weaker Writing

https://www.popularairsoft.com/news/tokyo-marui-colt-mk12-mws-gbbr-lone-survivor-custom
Extract from the original article.
This Tokyo Marui Colt MK12 MWS GBBR “Lone Survivor” Custom is a more recent work by NextGen Retros. This custom gas blowback project includes a Nova M16A1 Lower, Tokyo Marui M4 Upper and internals, G&P M16A2 MWS Stock, M16A1 Grip from Brownells, MWC Frontset, Harris Style Bipod, and an M3 Style Scope.
An edited version of the same extract.
This Tokyo Marui Colt MK12 MWS GBBR “Lone Survivor” Custom is based on Tokyo Marui, modified to Tokyo Marui MWS, a more recent work by NextGen Retros.
They custom…
- gas blowback
- Nova M16A1 Lower
- Tokyo Marui M4 Upper
- Tokyo Marui M4 internals
- G&P M16A1 MWS Stock
- M16A1 Grip from Browneslls
- MWC Frontset
- Harris Style Bipod
- M3 Style Scope
Changes made:
- Show parts as dots
- Make column layout neater
- added details